11/1/11 It is done

Well. That's it, really.  The story is cleaned up as best I can, thanks to the help of Newfur, with special thanks to Metassus who volunteered but was unfortunately not able to help me out.  The story, as presently constructed, is either 7976 words, or 8140 (PolyEdit and Google Docs, respectively), but that's still quite cool.  Glad I finished the story, and really... hopefully I can make it in. 

In the meantime, up to something else. Probably Morph Class.